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TAGS: Sci-fi, Adventure, Space Program
Title: Our First Steps
Author: Mrakoplaz
Preview image artist: Unknown
EqDa story page: [link]
Author synopsis: In a secluded desert on the frontiers of Equestria, an eccentric genius works to bring the stars within reach of everypony; But can smiths and metalworkers who never made anything more difficult than ploughs or golden trinkets really make the dream a reality? Or has inspiration arrived a hundred years too early?
I AM NOT THE AUTHOR OF THIS STORY OR THE ARTIST OF THE PREVIEW IMAGE.
Story stats:
Chapters: 16
Pages: 596
Words: 185,000
UPDATES
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1) 02:11am, 09/26/2011 - Chapter 8 added
2) 10:53pm, 10/11/2011 - Chapter 9 added
3) 09:50pm, 10/31/2011 - Chapter 10 added
4) 12:11am, 11/20/2011 - Chapter 11 added
5) 04:08am, 12/24/2011 - Chapter 12 added, Revised ToC
6) 02:50pm, 01/02/2012 - Chapter 13 added
7) 08:56pm, 01/30/2012 - Chapter 14 added
8) 03:17am, 03/04/2012 - Chapter 15 added
9) 12:03am, 04/23/2012 - Chapter 16 added
TAGS: Sci-fi, Adventure, Space Program
Title: Our First Steps
Author: Mrakoplaz
Preview image artist: Unknown
EqDa story page: [link]
Author synopsis: In a secluded desert on the frontiers of Equestria, an eccentric genius works to bring the stars within reach of everypony; But can smiths and metalworkers who never made anything more difficult than ploughs or golden trinkets really make the dream a reality? Or has inspiration arrived a hundred years too early?
I AM NOT THE AUTHOR OF THIS STORY OR THE ARTIST OF THE PREVIEW IMAGE.
Story stats:
Chapters: 16
Pages: 596
Words: 185,000
UPDATES
-------
1) 02:11am, 09/26/2011 - Chapter 8 added
2) 10:53pm, 10/11/2011 - Chapter 9 added
3) 09:50pm, 10/31/2011 - Chapter 10 added
4) 12:11am, 11/20/2011 - Chapter 11 added
5) 04:08am, 12/24/2011 - Chapter 12 added, Revised ToC
6) 02:50pm, 01/02/2012 - Chapter 13 added
7) 08:56pm, 01/30/2012 - Chapter 14 added
8) 03:17am, 03/04/2012 - Chapter 15 added
9) 12:03am, 04/23/2012 - Chapter 16 added
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Though I really like this story, the difference between "wondering" and "wandering" is something the author should have learned in elementary school. Otherwise, this story is fantastic.